Kia Ora everybody!
Today my class did creative writing.
I hope you enjoy reading my story.
The hard part was choosing a genre.
My favourite part was separating the writing into paragraphs.
The Magical White Rabbit
It was a sunny morning, I saw my mum packing all our bags and my dad taking my siblings luggage into the car. I asked my dad “where are we going?”
“I’m sorry Claire,” he said, “we are moving to a new place.” I was very sad that we were moving and I didn’t know why. When my siblings and I went in the car it was a very long way to our destination. I smelled the cow poop as we drove into the countryside.
The White rabbit
It was a sunny morning, I saw my mum packing all our bags and my dad taking my siblings luggage into the car. I asked my dad “where are we going?”
“I’m sorry Claire,” he said, “we are moving to a new place.” I was very sad that we were moving and I didn’t know why. When my siblings and I went in the car it was a very long way to our destination. I smelled the cow poop as we drove into the countryside.
When we got there we went into our new house and it wasn’t anything like our old house. All my siblings were happy, but I wanted to go back to the city. “At least we have a farm dog,” said dad. “I just don’t get why we left,” I said to dad as I stormed off. “You knew it was getting expensive where we lived, Claire” said mum. I went into the forest next to our house to get some peace and quiet, until.
I saw a cute white rabbit laying on the leaves. I went to follow it, but I stepped on a crunchy leaf and it woke up. I followed the rabbit, then I saw a small door inside the bushes. My siblings were calling me to have lunch, but I opened the door.
Next thing I find myself getting sucked into the portal. “Ahh!” I screamed. A few minutes later I see a magical world with mystical birds chirping, mythical flowers, fairies and a beautiful castle. I observed everything around me and explored.
Until I started to have a weird feeling. “ I wanna go home,” I said to one of the fairies. The fairy started to laugh towards me. “Once you come here there is no turning back,” she said. I was so shocked when I heard her, I started to feel guilty and stressed. “How do I get out?” I said. I looked into every bush, I even tried looking for the white rabbit I saw earlier. Just when I was gonna break into tears a sweet looking lady came to me and said “ are you okay my dear?”
“I wanna get out of here” I said. The lady brought me into her house and gave me a sweet cup of hot cocoa. She opened a secret door inside her house and I thanked her so much because it was the exit.
I went out and back to my home and hugged my mom and dad so hard.