Tag: Creative

The Mystery Map

Today I finished writing creative writing, I had to think of the characters names, characteristics and personalities. It was fun making all the twists and turns.

 

I had just moved into my new house. They say that a millionaire once lived here. I didn’t think much of it until I saw a huge bump near the withered oak tree, I got my garden shovel and started digging.

 

 My shovel finally stopped and I pulled out a small box with a satchel inside. Inside the satchel there was a map. I was curious and it took me a few days to finally follow it. I took a look at the map and it went through the ocean, so I reached out to my friend and they gave me a boat. I started packing some resources, a life jacket for safety and started sailing. I should’ve sailed smoothly until a huge dark cloud was coming my way. I was scared and started to feel unsettled. I couldn’t do anything except wait.

 

Soon after I woke up, I didn’t know I had been sleeping this whole time! The sky rumbled as the sea waved and crashed hard on the boat. I was swallowing lots of sea water and then I fainted. I finally woke up after days, my boat was at the edge of an island. I was starving and weak. I looked through the boat and there were cans of water and nutrients bars. Later I noticed my map was gone, I freaked out. 

 

I stepped out of the boat and collected lots of resources. There was fresh water deep in the forest. I drank and drank until I could burst. I went to my boat and got all the cans to start filling them with water. I thought I could stay on the island until I thought of the life I had back home, everything was going so well. I was determined to start again. I sailed until nothing could stop me. I ate fish, raw fish.

 

It has been a month already. I was sick and tired of eating fish. I didn’t know what to do anymore. I was sure I had been reported missing, but no one ever came. I was floating on a boat in the middle of the ocean. I was weak when my boat was on an island. The sun shone into my eyes as I crawled onto the sand weakly. A few hours later some people found me laying on the sand. I sat down thinking what could’ve been the treasure.

     

 

Dinosaur Narrative

Isla has a new dinosaur friend

Kia Ora!

Yesterday we did a Narrative, but we had to contin ue an introduction of one. It was hard to find ideas of how the dinosaur would act or say. My dinosaur was a herbivore and he only eats trees so that was why he was so friendly.

You all can have a read of it. Let me know what I should add!

The dinosaur scales were round and felt like rocks. Isla wasn’t afraid of the creature, instead she liked the creature. She fed it lots of greenery and the dinosaur loved her. Isla’s mom then called her home for brunch. “Bye!’ said Isla. 

 

The dinosaur followed her home. “Ahhh what’s that?” Said Isla’s mom. Isla then looked behind, that’s my little friend she said with a magnificent smile on her face. “Little friend?!” her mom says “you mean big friend?” The little girl then ate her food then raced along the path. 

 

She whistled for the dinosaur and then heard some big stomps. “Ahh there you are!” she said. “Won’t you come into the dark forest and play with me?” Isla said. So they went to play in the scary dark forest not knowing what was in there. As they went in the leaves crackled under Isla’s yellow boots. “Let’s play hide and seek,” Isla said. 

 

They separated soon after and then they lost each other. Isla knew it was getting late and. The wolves howled as she walked on the mud and leaves. She raced along the muddy path then, she saw three big carnivore dinosaurs. She ran as fast as she could back along the muddy path, until she saw her friend.

 

“Help!” she desperately yelled. Her dinosaur friend pushed her as far as he could then the dinosaurs came for him. He got hurt badly then fainted. “Noo!” cried Isla, but it was too late already. She had that that he passed but he just fainted. She was then about to leave with a very upset face, then he woke up. “What a miracle!” she said. From that day they never went into the deep forest ever again.

Bye everyone!