Tag: Descriptive

Dinosaur Narrative

Isla has a new dinosaur friend

Kia Ora!

Yesterday we did a Narrative, but we had to contin ue an introduction of one. It was hard to find ideas of how the dinosaur would act or say. My dinosaur was a herbivore and he only eats trees so that was why he was so friendly.

You all can have a read of it. Let me know what I should add!

The dinosaur scales were round and felt like rocks. Isla wasn’t afraid of the creature, instead she liked the creature. She fed it lots of greenery and the dinosaur loved her. Isla’s mom then called her home for brunch. “Bye!’ said Isla. 

 

The dinosaur followed her home. “Ahhh what’s that?” Said Isla’s mom. Isla then looked behind, that’s my little friend she said with a magnificent smile on her face. “Little friend?!” her mom says “you mean big friend?” The little girl then ate her food then raced along the path. 

 

She whistled for the dinosaur and then heard some big stomps. “Ahh there you are!” she said. “Won’t you come into the dark forest and play with me?” Isla said. So they went to play in the scary dark forest not knowing what was in there. As they went in the leaves crackled under Isla’s yellow boots. “Let’s play hide and seek,” Isla said. 

 

They separated soon after and then they lost each other. Isla knew it was getting late and. The wolves howled as she walked on the mud and leaves. She raced along the muddy path then, she saw three big carnivore dinosaurs. She ran as fast as she could back along the muddy path, until she saw her friend.

 

“Help!” she desperately yelled. Her dinosaur friend pushed her as far as he could then the dinosaurs came for him. He got hurt badly then fainted. “Noo!” cried Isla, but it was too late already. She had that that he passed but he just fainted. She was then about to leave with a very upset face, then he woke up. “What a miracle!” she said. From that day they never went into the deep forest ever again.

Bye everyone!