Tag: Writing

Dinosaur Narrative

Isla has a new dinosaur friend

Kia Ora!

Yesterday we did a Narrative, but we had to contin ue an introduction of one. It was hard to find ideas of how the dinosaur would act or say. My dinosaur was a herbivore and he only eats trees so that was why he was so friendly.

You all can have a read of it. Let me know what I should add!

The dinosaur scales were round and felt like rocks. Isla wasn’t afraid of the creature, instead she liked the creature. She fed it lots of greenery and the dinosaur loved her. Isla’s mom then called her home for brunch. “Bye!’ said Isla. 

 

The dinosaur followed her home. “Ahhh what’s that?” Said Isla’s mom. Isla then looked behind, that’s my little friend she said with a magnificent smile on her face. “Little friend?!” her mom says “you mean big friend?” The little girl then ate her food then raced along the path. 

 

She whistled for the dinosaur and then heard some big stomps. “Ahh there you are!” she said. “Won’t you come into the dark forest and play with me?” Isla said. So they went to play in the scary dark forest not knowing what was in there. As they went in the leaves crackled under Isla’s yellow boots. “Let’s play hide and seek,” Isla said. 

 

They separated soon after and then they lost each other. Isla knew it was getting late and. The wolves howled as she walked on the mud and leaves. She raced along the muddy path then, she saw three big carnivore dinosaurs. She ran as fast as she could back along the muddy path, until she saw her friend.

 

“Help!” she desperately yelled. Her dinosaur friend pushed her as far as he could then the dinosaurs came for him. He got hurt badly then fainted. “Noo!” cried Isla, but it was too late already. She had that that he passed but he just fainted. She was then about to leave with a very upset face, then he woke up. “What a miracle!” she said. From that day they never went into the deep forest ever again.

Bye everyone!

 

Holiday recount

Holiday recounts

last week we made holiday recounts.

it was hard to write so much.

It was so fun writing it on my chromebook.

Here is my story.

During the holidays we got a dog whose name was Hugo. He is a Cane Corso, we got all his food, toys and information. We noticed we still had to get him Vaccinated. So we booked an appointment at Greenlane vets. 15 days later it was the day to go to the vet. When we went into the waiting room we heard lots of dogs and cats whining. Before we went in the room to get the vaccine our dog got weighed before coming in.  

The veterinarian checked his eyes, ears, mouth and nose. After that she gave him the vaccine and told us his diet, what he cannot eat and how he should be exercised. When he was done with his checkup we enrolled him into a puppy training school for the 15th of February and now he is going today. A few minutes later the vet gave us a bag with treats and a leash then we put Hugo on his leash and then went home.

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