Tag: Narrative

Dinosaur Narrative

Isla has a new dinosaur friend

Kia Ora!

Yesterday we did a Narrative, but we had to contin ue an introduction of one. It was hard to find ideas of how the dinosaur would act or say. My dinosaur was a herbivore and he only eats trees so that was why he was so friendly.

You all can have a read of it. Let me know what I should add!

The dinosaur scales were round and felt like rocks. Isla wasn’t afraid of the creature, instead she liked the creature. She fed it lots of greenery and the dinosaur loved her. Isla’s mom then called her home for brunch. “Bye!’ said Isla. 

 

The dinosaur followed her home. “Ahhh what’s that?” Said Isla’s mom. Isla then looked behind, that’s my little friend she said with a magnificent smile on her face. “Little friend?!” her mom says “you mean big friend?” The little girl then ate her food then raced along the path. 

 

She whistled for the dinosaur and then heard some big stomps. “Ahh there you are!” she said. “Won’t you come into the dark forest and play with me?” Isla said. So they went to play in the scary dark forest not knowing what was in there. As they went in the leaves crackled under Isla’s yellow boots. “Let’s play hide and seek,” Isla said. 

 

They separated soon after and then they lost each other. Isla knew it was getting late and. The wolves howled as she walked on the mud and leaves. She raced along the muddy path then, she saw three big carnivore dinosaurs. She ran as fast as she could back along the muddy path, until she saw her friend.

 

“Help!” she desperately yelled. Her dinosaur friend pushed her as far as he could then the dinosaurs came for him. He got hurt badly then fainted. “Noo!” cried Isla, but it was too late already. She had that that he passed but he just fainted. She was then about to leave with a very upset face, then he woke up. “What a miracle!” she said. From that day they never went into the deep forest ever again.

Bye everyone!

 

Creative Writing

Kia Ora everybody!

Today my class did creative writing.

I hope you enjoy reading my story.

The hard part was choosing a genre.

My favourite part was separating the writing into paragraphs.

The Magical White Rabbit

 

It was a sunny morning, I saw my mum packing all our bags and my dad taking my siblings luggage into the car. I asked my dad “where are we going?”  

“I’m sorry Claire,” he said, “we are moving to a new place.” I was very sad that we were moving and I didn’t know why. When my siblings and I went in the car it was a very long way to our destination. I smelled the cow poop as we drove into the countryside.

The White rabbit

It was a sunny morning, I saw my mum packing all our bags and my dad taking my siblings luggage into the car. I asked my dad “where are we going?”  

“I’m sorry Claire,” he said, “we are moving to a new place.” I was very sad that we were moving and I didn’t know why. When my siblings and I went in the car it was a very long way to our destination. I smelled the cow poop as we drove into the countryside.

 

When we got there we went into our new house and it wasn’t anything like our old house. All my siblings were happy, but I wanted to go back to the city. “At least we have a farm dog,” said dad.  “I just don’t get why we left,” I said to dad as I stormed off. “You knew it was getting expensive where we lived, Claire” said mum.  I went into the forest next to our house to get some peace and quiet, until.

 

I saw a cute white rabbit laying on the leaves. I went to follow it, but I stepped on a crunchy leaf and it woke up. I followed the rabbit, then I saw a small door inside the bushes. My siblings were calling me to have lunch, but I opened the door.

 

Next thing I find myself getting sucked into the portal. “Ahh!” I screamed.     A few minutes later I see a magical world with mystical birds chirping, mythical flowers, fairies and a beautiful castle.  I observed everything around me and explored.

 

 Until I started to have a weird feeling. “ I wanna go home,” I said to one of the fairies. The fairy started to laugh towards me. “Once you come here there is no turning back,” she said. I was so shocked when I heard her, I started to feel guilty and stressed. “How do I get out?” I said. I looked into every bush, I even tried looking for the white rabbit I saw earlier. Just when I was gonna break into tears a sweet looking lady came to me and said “ are you okay my dear?”

“I wanna get out of here” I said. The lady brought me into her house and gave me a sweet cup of hot cocoa. She opened a secret door inside her house and I thanked her so much because it was the exit.

 

I went out and back to my home and hugged my mom and dad so hard.

            

 

Otter Narrative

Kia Ora viewers,

On Monday my class wrote otter narratives. It was really fun because you can put any twists or turns you like into a narrative.

I found it hard to find more ideas for the story.

The fun part was finding a name for the forest, my forest name was Shimmer-water forest.

 

Otter narrative

In the deep parts of the enchanted Shimmer-water Forest there was a lovely otter called Ozzy. Ozzy lived in the highest oak tree in the forest. He loved taking photos and was very passionate about it. Ozzy would walk around the forest and he’d always dream of his photographs being noticed by everyone, but there was this wise old owl named Hiram that would always doubt that Ozzy would be noticed. He says that Ozzy needs more excitement in his shots.

Ozzy would never give up on his dreams, with full Determination to change Hiram’s mind he wanted to take a unique picture that would be enough to impress him. As Ozzy roamed around the forest he enjoyed the beams of sunlight shining, but he couldn’t find anything. Soon later he stumbled upon a small tunnel through the bushes. He was very curious what could be in there, so he went in.

Ozzy went deeper and deeper, until.. He saw the most beautiful landscape, “a wonderland!” he said. The clouds looked like cotton candy and there were all types of beautiful shimmering flowers and sparkly flamingos, and amazing fruits no one had ever seen before, but there was one thing that caught his attention. In the middle of the wonderland was a tall golden oak tree with long gold branches and lush leaves. He looked up at the tree and saw a golden bird. It was so beautiful that Ozzy did not dare to blink his eyes in fear that it was just a dream. Never in his life had he seen such a mythical bird with a long golden tail, Its fur was scintillating (sparkling or shining brightly) with yellow gold and the sun that points directed to the bird makes it hard for a normal eye to stare as it shines so bright like the sun rays. Ozzy was fascinated! He quickly aimed a good shot with his camera, “one, two, three… Click!” Ozzy seemed to never get enough and decided to take a video for everyone to see, when suddenly the unknown golden bird with a long golden tail spread its wings and flew away into the bright sky.

What a sight! Ozzy was amazed, everything was caught on video. He rushed to find his way back home and excitedly showed everyone all his photos and videos. He desperately raced to the wise owls place and showed the videos, “wow in all my years of living I have never seen anything this enchanting!” said the wise old owl, “You have impressed me, well done.” Ozzy was so happy that he was finally able to prove himself to Hiram that anyone can do anything.

The end, By Zaynab.

 

Hope you enjoyed my story! Comment your favourite part of it.

The boastful reindeer Narrative

Aloha!

Today I wrote a narrative about a Boastful reindeer.

The most challenging part was getting the idea, until I found this Story starter That helped me a lot.

My highlight was getting the topic of the story.

Have you made a Narrative with a reindeer before?

 

 

 

The boastful Reindeer

 

The race was coming up on the 26th of April. The most boastful and mean reindeer obviously came and joined. The day before the contest the reindeer Bragged to everyone that he would win with his shiny red car. To go even further he stuck flyers of his red car on every traffic light pole.  The boastful reindeer would do anything to show off, It was starting to hurt lots of peoples feelings. Everyone in town got so annoyed at him and they came up with a plan. Racers from the contest decided on the day they would hide his car just before the race started. 

On the 26th, the day of the race he says “WHERE IS MY CAR?” The workers gave him a rusty old one with almost no fuel and flat tires, He tried to get his car back, but got nothing in the end. When the race started the reindeer was the farthest animal back. The boastful reindeer tried so hard to get up to the front, but the race car he was on was as slow as a sloth! He ended up losing last place and was so angry.

After the race the reindeer was upset that he lost his car and fans. Many days and times he tried to get his car back and started to notice what he had done and had hopelessly slept through the night with guilt.  The next day he started peeling the flyers of the pole and apologising to everybody, Until some people that he thinks he remembers from the race stop by him and said that they had to give him a taste of his own medicine and even got his race car. The Boastful Reindeer thanked them and said that he couldn’t have changed if it weren’t for them.  After all of that the Boastful reindeer didn’t have the boastful reindeer as his title anymore. The little Reindeer learnt to choose the right choice and to not show off because he doesn’t know what others feel and how they take it as.

 

Hope you guys enjoyed it!

Come back for more next time!