Kia Ora viewers,
On Monday my class wrote otter narratives. It was really fun because you can put any twists or turns you like into a narrative.
I found it hard to find more ideas for the story.
The fun part was finding a name for the forest, my forest name was Shimmer-water forest.
Otter narrative
In the deep parts of the enchanted Shimmer-water Forest there was a lovely otter called Ozzy. Ozzy lived in the highest oak tree in the forest. He loved taking photos and was very passionate about it. Ozzy would walk around the forest and he’d always dream of his photographs being noticed by everyone, but there was this wise old owl named Hiram that would always doubt that Ozzy would be noticed. He says that Ozzy needs more excitement in his shots.
Ozzy would never give up on his dreams, with full Determination to change Hiram’s mind he wanted to take a unique picture that would be enough to impress him. As Ozzy roamed around the forest he enjoyed the beams of sunlight shining, but he couldn’t find anything. Soon later he stumbled upon a small tunnel through the bushes. He was very curious what could be in there, so he went in.
Ozzy went deeper and deeper, until.. He saw the most beautiful landscape, “a wonderland!” he said. The clouds looked like cotton candy and there were all types of beautiful shimmering flowers and sparkly flamingos, and amazing fruits no one had ever seen before, but there was one thing that caught his attention. In the middle of the wonderland was a tall golden oak tree with long gold branches and lush leaves. He looked up at the tree and saw a golden bird. It was so beautiful that Ozzy did not dare to blink his eyes in fear that it was just a dream. Never in his life had he seen such a mythical bird with a long golden tail, Its fur was scintillating (sparkling or shining brightly) with yellow gold and the sun that points directed to the bird makes it hard for a normal eye to stare as it shines so bright like the sun rays. Ozzy was fascinated! He quickly aimed a good shot with his camera, “one, two, three… Click!” Ozzy seemed to never get enough and decided to take a video for everyone to see, when suddenly the unknown golden bird with a long golden tail spread its wings and flew away into the bright sky.
What a sight! Ozzy was amazed, everything was caught on video. He rushed to find his way back home and excitedly showed everyone all his photos and videos. He desperately raced to the wise owls place and showed the videos, “wow in all my years of living I have never seen anything this enchanting!” said the wise old owl, “You have impressed me, well done.” Ozzy was so happy that he was finally able to prove himself to Hiram that anyone can do anything.
The end, By Zaynab.
Hope you enjoyed my story! Comment your favourite part of it.